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Poster Critique

Some of my texts are too small and need to do some variation with size.With one of my posters my word disappears in the text and becomes a mark The pieces are angry . All of them are very aggressive and masculine. The sound is hard to decipher. One is like a leaking faucet or dripping. The positioning on my piece was good and two of them  flow but one is in between where it is but it isn't. My marks works well with my quote except the two without splatter marks. With some of my pieces I didn't have a lot of negative space but also works well with it.

Artist

Abstract Expressionism 

Ron English, New Atlantis, 2007

Dan Flavin 23.11.2006 - 08.04.2007

Dan Flavin 2009

Lecture

Quotes

1. God helps them that helps themselves
2. through God who strengthens me 
3. love is great when you find someone 
4. love is neither true or false , love is love
5. No one is ever betrayed by true love
6. Reason and love are sworn enemies
7. Its not cheating unless you get caught
8. Avoid hangovers; stay drunk
9. Ive got problem for you solution
10. Friendship is a sheltering true

10 sketches

left to right: bundle in a circle, two pencils, 4 pencils 2 in each hand, strike the page, one side with bundle, strike the page, swirl, both hands, twirl, slide across page

16 sketches

Left to right: my marker device plus right had splat, spoon eyes closed making 100 parallel lines, folded paper, staying in one spot, twirl with fork,
bottom: twirl, marker device, folded paper using left hand, stroke down, marker device and eyes closed, tape, tape, marker device plus tape, crumbled paper, crumble paper

Process Performace

This was also fun I cant say I didn't have fun doing any of the three. I had a great amount if fun creating things for them. But for the performance I initially wanted three dolls and set one of them on fire or chop the head off. The story was one barbie steal the other barbie ken. But i kept that story line and used people and I was gonna be this fat ugly betty but I thought that it was better by being a sweet church going girl that way at the end when i beat the hooker it would be this contrast! My attire was well picked and my colors matched.

Process Uncomfortable

My uncomfortable was another fun thing for me too do! I had so many ideas I didnt know what to to do. First i was trying go with the sexual uncomfortable but that was hard to execute because how uncomfortable it was especially being taped doing something that is suppose to be private. So I did the bathroom scene which was my favorite place to be but i know that my friends get uncomfortable when i talk about so i figure I use it.

Process Monologue

My monologue was a very interesting process. I went through a few take but I wouldn't say many because then it would lose its essence and start to look so rehearsed. I was going for comedy but I believe that is my tendency to do a lot of things! But I couldn't imagine doing something that saddens or madden anyone because I know how it is to be that way and sometimes hard to get out of those moods! But I am going to redo mine because mr.bill said that it wasn't me as much as someone else but my new one should be better.

HUMAN COMPOSITION CRIT

My group did a good job on making our dots come to life with our bodies. It was clear that we had a theme of a murder scene or dead bodies!! It was said that it was good that we were in all black it blended well with the background. Also with one of the others with her with a slight different fabric was not at all a distraction and it  contrasted with the circles and the entire piece.

Brainstorms

1. cut self
2. naked
3. wear black go agains white wall
4. disappear in the white background
5. black fist
6. gloves as circles
7. hang glide over Jamaica
8. pyramid
9. underwater
10. laying on floor and shoot above
11. mouths
12. inverse 
13. oreos and milk
14. chocolate chip cookies
15. gladiator theme

Texture

I have a variety of textures but the favorites are the ones that pop out off the page. My craft can be cleaned up some more like for instance with the pop out don't let the white or background show cover it  with newspaper.

Playful/periodic critique

With my playful periodic work was cool. I mostly enjoyed doing the playful because of the neat ways to form the squares. My class mates said that my playful was better and more interesting than my periodic but how ironic is that. Periodical things aren't to interesting if they are it becomes more playful. My craft could have been better but not much to change more like detail.

Progress report CARDBOARD

Well, my cardboard ended up to be something pretty cool. THe ending result was something like a rock but as my classmates put it was somewhat like a dinosaur head. At first it didnt seem like it was gonna be anything worth looking at but as time went by and different suggestions and accidents it became a little interesting. I can say that I am proud to show my cardboard rock off :)!